Elevator Pitch 2

This is a link to my second elevator pitch!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NM711QcTd7I

I feel like my feedback on my last elevator pitch was a bit too nice. I feel like it did not give me much to improve on. I would like to think that it was perfect but I know there was some things that could improve. I watched my own first elevator pitch and tried to improve on where I emphasized my words as well trying to keep better eye contact.

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  1. Ellliot LopatukhinOctober 22, 2017 at 1:36 PM

    Again, great job on this elevator pitch. You were dressed nicely, spoke very clearly, and effectively explained how your product would be beneficial to the target market. In addition to all of that, you described how the product works, giving yourself and your product credibility. The only thing that I would improve on is your camera quality, but obviously this is not a real elevator pitch and you probably just have to work with whatever resources you have on hand. Overall, great job on this second version of this elevator pitch.

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  2. UnknownOctober 22, 2017 at 5:34 PM

    You did a good job with this elevator pitch. You spoke very quickly which I understand is because you had a lot of important information to squeeze into a minute, but your pitch could definitely be slowed down a little. You looked very professional and sounded confident which was great!

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